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Danioover9000

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   PERSPECTIVAL MADNESS

 

   I play perspectives, like Locke's detectives.

   Inspective of my own introspection.

   Introduction to my own conclusions.

   Collusions building my self delusions.

   Delirium deluges me into lunacy.

   See? Lunar and Luna even disown me.

   Hearing my own voice voicing my own view.

   Point to another perspective I feel.

   Peels my view aside, for just this rhymes I.

   mind's eye mind crafting rhyme schematics I.

   Get Mora and more manic, oh Nora-

   Countless stars in the sea, where's my honor?

   Star of the sea lost in dishonor.

   What is this madness, dual to trinity?

   Masculine feminine alien views.

   Homo to hetero to Herma-Aphrodite.

   So many views I'm stuck in this prism.

   Mental schism, perspectival madness.

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   A LOVE LETTER TO DESTINY'S DIVORCE

 

It's hurts, you know? Really does...when an ego mind thinks it can be destiny itself.

It's like fated, right? Fate fates fating face, saving grace? Nay, too morally debased.

Selfish nestles in big gnomes, red garden secrets untold.

From sickness to strife, till death do us apart. 

 

 

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   Savage rant. Some of it is over dramatic, but there's always a kernel of truth in here:

 

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   I don't know if it's UK grime or drill, but it's quite upbeat with the music beats, and nice simple rap flows. Quite groovy:

 

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   This was a really good rap battle, Mickey Factz versus Daylite, and IMO Factz takes the W:

   Daylite was WAY TOO LYRICAL MIRACLE SPIRITUAL, too stage green. Pointless in a rap battle, come on you got t be disrespectful, disparaging and attack your opponent with personals man. Mickey Factz is less technical and word salad, but at least he's got Daylite in his sights.

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   THE TRIDENT SKEWER

Firstly, At Never intimate, volatile scum, sexual cu** hoping hoes would suck his toes Nympho.

Secondly, At Vile rodent, utterly benign, emasculated lad, how glad you're second to that nympho above, but seconds away from my oven mitts.

Lastly, At Lusty illiterate Lila, late at midnight, fantasizing 69s with the nympho and the rodent late.

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On 2024-01-01 at 2:20 PM, Danioover9000 said:

   THE TRIDENT SKEWER

Firstly, At Never intimate, volatile scum, sexual cu** hoping hoes would suck his toes Nympho. Put the phony down, Nymphomaniac, you had to maniac with the nick knack at me, try to hack n slash what you really can't cam, a wannabe clams casino, but can't see no rope roped around neck, pretends no lowering down your grave hole, you A-hole, no ace of spades or royalty to Texas hold'em the pay. 

Secondly, At Vile rodent, utterly benign, emasculated lad, how glad you're second to that nympho above, but seconds away from my oven mitts, heat pressurizes you to a ruby.

Lastly, At Lusty illiterate Lila, late at midnight, fantasizing 69s with the nympho and the rodent late game, after flickering flame. Wait, who's this hoe again, wannabe the pair of shoes for these princesses?

 

 

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I think this song is also quite underrated:

   I can definitely hear the origins of Eminem's the slim shady style from just this song, also a bit of Cannabis the rapper too. Interesting this song and others from Cage predate Slim Shady, all because one rapper got good marketing and buzz over cage here.

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   This is pure comedy gold, sometimes way better and entertaining than a typical diss track just for the roasting:

 

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   Just amazing what you can do with A.I programs.

   Ben versus Destiny in rap would be amazing and funny AF.

 

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   Probably the best freestyle so far, but IMO it's the best pre writtens freestyle, just the execution is too clean for it to be 'off the dome' or completely improvisational:

 

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   Not the first rapper to talk about spirituality or psychedelics, that's Day Lit and a few more, but this is a nice rap song IMO:

 

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   Candace Owens got to chill a bit:

 

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   I can't believe how lunatic is this Lunar C really is:

   Christ, some UK people are crazy...

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   One of my first palpable cognitive dissonances I have experienced, when 2 people I admire a bit beefed like this:

   And IMO Eminem is the instigator here. Just a pretty bad look to decide to go after Michael Jackson like this. 

   I also disagree with this 'freedom of speech' that Eminem's team came up with. Firstly, 'freedom of speech' does not defend you from civil lawsuit and lawsuit of reputational damages, including slander, defamation, and smearing, which IMO Michael Jackson would likely win if he took this to court because there's reasonable doubt that that is likely to happen in considering each parody element that Slim Shady has done there, a Judge and Jury would have a field day against Eminem here. A legal case here, from preliminary trial would be to prove/disprove intent to defame, slander, ridicule, and reputational/public damages which I felt likely would pass into a civil/criminal court case.

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   Imma post here to remind myself the Hodge Twins are in my black list of names to include in my future diss tracks, or shout outs:

   They technically on the right, especially when subliminal programming of music goes so far as to make people normalize gang culture and violence, or some other lifestyle.

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   While I'm here, I'll post the latest in Eminem's diss tracks, starting on doomsday part 2 which is a Benzino diss:

Lyrical analysis, some on poetic and literal devices:

musical patterns analysis:

 

   Then Benzino's disses in order:

Lyrical analysis, some on poetic and literal devices:

musical patterns analysis:

 

Lyrical analysis, some on poetic and literal devices:

musical patterns analysis:

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   Cassidy has come out to PPPLLLAAAYYY! Cashis and Eminem diss track:

 

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   I can't believe I found these 2 disses towards Eminem, so good to listen to!

 

 

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