Two new poems

[caspex]

"I got wet in this warm waterfall that originates from nowhere
I surrendered to the pressure of this waterfall.
I let go of myself and let the water move me wherever it likes
I let it take me to the furthest of places, I closed my eyes
Succumb, Surrender, Let go
I let myself be, be one with it's flow.

Than I let the river take me wherever
I stopped worrying about hitting the rocks in the way, for there were none.
I opened my eyes and looked at the the sky's magnificent stars
Twinkling as the owls hooted and wolves howled in the forest around the river
Even with this dance of sound, sight, feel and smell around me
I found this stillness permeating through it all, peace. 
Nothingness dancing as something"

I wrote another poem. I have a question. Is it ok to keep posting poems I write overtime here in this sub forum? 

Edit: I came up with another poem when walking around. Thought I should add it in here.

"The owls hoot into the full moon,
The wolves howl into the night sky.
A certain silence lives in the vastness of this forest.
I bask in it, I soak it in
I let it seep into me, permeate me
I sit, and be."

Edited December 16, 2020 by Swarnim

[ajai]

Good one bruh,

Yes yes sure thing, post all your poems in a separate thread only dedicated to your poems with a catchy title, for new ones visiting the forum, the already existing ones, who like your work would just follow the same, but I insist you to keep them all in one separate thread.

So now you would be making one thread in this sub forum with this poem plus the poem you wrote coupla days back and thereafter post your future work in the same thread as well.

Regards.

Edited December 16, 2020 by ajai

[caspex]

Just now, ajai said:

Good one bruh,

Yes yes sure thing, post all your poems in a separate thread only dedicated for your poems with a catchy title, for new ones visiting the forums, for the already existing who like your work can just follow it, but insist to keep them all in one separate thread, and post all your future poems in that same thread only.

So now you would be making one thread in this sub forum with this poem plus the poem you wrote coupla days back and thereafter post where you can post your future work.

Regards.

A poem journal in the journals sub forum would be nice I think

[ajai]

Yepp that'd work as well.

[Grateful Dead]

beautiful poems ?

[Nahm]

[Guest SirVladimir]

Hell yes! We need more creative juices around here.

[electroBeam]

Love all of your answers on here, thanks for being around.

And yes, your poems are great aswell!

[Shunyata]

@Swarnim did you write the poem or did the poem flow through you? 

Edited December 17, 2020 by Shunyata

[caspex]

3 hours ago, Shunyata said:

@Swarnim did you write the poem or did the poem flow through you? 

The second poem flew more through me than the first one. Both flew through tho!