Come to your senses

[caspex]

"The rose blooms red,
The tulip blooms yellow,
The lotus is pink.
Surrender to each sense and just sink.
It goes inwards infinitely,
Look how creation is crafted so precisely.
Just as sight can be zoomed in forever to see how infinite it is,
Each of the other sense can be inquired into so as well.

Sight is so magnificent.
You can't describe color or shape; or near and far,
But you can witness how meaningless they are.
It's inexpressible. 

Sound is so wonderful.
Get lost in it,
Focus on it so much that You are gone.
It could be pure silence or a lovely song.

Feeling is so divine,
It is either in the body as sensation or as thinking in the mind.
Everything is a feeling, from You to Other. 
Let go of some and and fully feel into another.

Smell is so incredible,
It's such a different dimension,
Crazy that it's even comprehendible.
Forget everything else and focus on the smell, it's so mystical. 

Taste is so heavenly.
Easy to get addicted specially.
It is combined with feeling at the tongue so it could be hard to discern,
But it is yet another dimension to explore and learn.

Each of the senses are a completely different inner dimension,
Yet there is no difference between either if you remove all conception.

Each is wondrous, from the beautiful highs to the disgusting lows,
So don't just explore the pleasurable but also your dislikes.
It could be a whole new level of clarity that follows."

I wrote this poem, fairly new to writing stuff like this. But it's intriguing and and first time writing something so spiritually based. 
Ofcourse it doesn't encompass everything I want to say. Infact really each sense is inexpressible. There's a lot to say, but also nothing to say.
Just a try. How do you guys like it?

[ajai]

Excellent Job Swarnim,

Keep up the good work Brodie! Would love to see more of those, this style is so rare. God Bless.

Edited December 5, 2020 by ajai

[seeking_brilliance]

@Swarnim this is the beginning of something wonderful. Please keep writing things like this ??

@SirVladimir

 

 

[Natasha]

@Swarnim Beautiful!  You can't go wrong when it comes to expressing yourself. Keep up the good work!

[Guest SirVladimir]

@seeking_brilliance Are we art connoisseurs now? 

Might as well...

Over cobbles snaked a river
by the moat sat a knight
weaving verses to his quiver
upon the sky ruled moonlight.

'Speak to me, Heart, sing
for myself a new poem I'm sewing
yours is a voice I shall quote
ram the verses down my throat.'

Edited December 5, 2020 by SirVladimir

[seeking_brilliance]

55 minutes ago, SirVladimir said:

Are we art connoisseurs now? 

Haha I dunno, but I def will encourage more of it any chance I get? 

I wish I was feeling poetic ?

Edited December 6, 2020 by seeking_brilliance

[PurpleTree]

Nicee  i'm not a huge poem guy but this was beautiful