Affirmations Feedback

[capriciousduck]

Hello guys, I've written some affirmations long ago and I think they worked. However, I just want to have your feedback. I just want to make them more effective. Please tell me about any improvements. I'll paste them here now. And if you like my affirmations, you too can use them. No copyright problems!

 

Affirmation-1 : 

Some people are known for Optimism. Some are known for Kindness. Likewise, I am known for Persistence. I am good at repeating my good habits. I exercise them every day. I improve every day. I have certain things in my persistence list. I have all the might to add, change, or even remove them. It depends on my choice. I know that I can master something only when I am persistent in doing that. Persistence is one of the beautiful traits a person can have. I’m glad that I already possess it.

Affirmation-2 :

This is a dream. The people, the things, the environment, the buildings, this digital paper, the voices, the emotions, and everything else is a dream. In a dream everything is possible. The dream can craft itself in a way it likes, in a way that’s most beneficial to the dream. What exists in this dream is infinite love, infinite intelligence, infinite persistence, infinite control, infinite happiness and joy, infinite self-esteem, infinite confidence, infinite energy, and infinite motivation. 

Everyone, except me, is there in the dream. Why? Because there is no me. The ‘I” doesn’t exist. ‘I’ am not inside the dream. I ‘am’ the dream!