Philosophical poetry

[Exystem]

Hey guys,
I love reading and writing poetry about deep philosophical stuff. My english is not the best but I gave it a try.
If you have any questions regarding content or language (maybe something doesn't fit the way I thought it would), feel free to ask
I would like to read some of your poems, getting some inspiration!

 

Lost in concepts, lost in words,
contemplating till it hurts.
Oh my god how can I see,
what is true reality?

Lost my faith and all beliefs,
like a tree will lose its leafs.
A denial of the truth
or a step towards the sooth?

No foundation nor a shelter,
can’t deny the helter-skelter.
I got lost inside my mind,
didn‘t see when I went blind.

Searching for the right direction,
but I live inside a bubble.
Every pointer a reflection
of my endless inner struggle.

Try to keep my inner balance,
I keep failing as i try.
Life is mocking all divalence,
every center is a lie.

So I’m falling into nothing,
nothing ever to hold on.
Didn’t know the void was bluffing,
there’s no end, it has foregone.

Finally I‘m realizing,
I am part of weightlessness.
Just a perfect compromising
between all the aimlessness.

Nothing left to compensate,
only love to radiate.
Where I go my steps will follow,
life gets full if seen as hollow.

Let‘s embrace our solitude,
notwithstanding magnitude,
traveling alone as one,
after devilry has gone.

[Victor Mgazi]

23 hours ago, Exystem said:

love reading and writing poetry about deep philosophical stuff. My english is not the best but I gave it a try.

Same here. Enjoyed your poem very much, it describes much of my passed experience.

23 hours ago, Exystem said:

would like to read some of your poems, getting some inspiration!

Not as good as you though ? but here's a recent one.

God is crazy,
God keeps talking to himself.
God is a narcist,
God keeps looking at himself.
God is nosey,
God can never know enough.
God is a dreamer,
God is always imagining stuff.
God is homeless,
God has nowhere to go.
God is lonely,
God is always all alone.
God is childlike,
God has nothing but energy.
God is a comic,
God never means anything.
God is a joker,
God tells his own travesty.
God is a wise ass,
God always sees everything.
God is lazy,
God never does anything.
God is an artist,
God has all creativity.
God is a storyteller,
God is a musician.
God is a dancer,
God is a magician.
God is...

[Exystem]

10 hours ago, Victor Mgazi said:

God is nosey,
God can never know enough.
God is a dreamer,
God is always imagining stuff.
God is homeless,
God has nowhere to go.
God is lonely,
God is always all alone.

Nice one! I enjoyed your poem, too. Especially the quoted part I like, it sums up quite well some of gods "traits". Thanks for posting!

 

Here's another shorter one from me:

 

When time stops splitting me apart
the present moment comes at heart
but time itself will never end
as long as I myself depend
on any notion to defend.

So I forget all terms and names
my body eaten up by flames
all earthly roots eradicated
my deepest longings liquidated
as meaning has evaporated.

The elements within the aether
allow the phoenix's rebreather.
 

[WhatAWondefulWorld]

@Exystem

6 hours ago, Exystem said:

So I forget all terms and names my body eaten up by flames
all earthly roots eradicated
my deepest longings liquidated
as meaning has evaporated.
 

Nice, I love it.?

[WaveInTheOcean]

Oneness

God says seek, but does not find,
until it lets go.

It needs to give itself Love,
cos' Love is letting go.

And then it will find,
it was itself it seeked.

Can you, my Love?

[Exystem]

@peachboy  Cool! I really like it

@WaveInTheOcean  Oh yeah! That's the way we're supposed to go!

Thanks for your contributions, inspiring!