Write a Haiku Poem

[Nak Khid]

Please write an original  Haiku and keep the syllables per line 5-7-5 
and as an added challenge avoid nature themes on the first poem you write

5
7
5

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If you wish you can also do a 3-5-3   Haiku which some people think is closer to Japanese form

3

5

3

 

 

Edited November 12, 2019 by Nak Khid

[Nak Khid]

a match invokes flame

it's smoke compensating time

cell screen cracked on floor

Edited November 11, 2019 by Nak Khid

[Mada_]

Today I failed

My literature exam

Still, I will succeed

[Nak Khid]

@Mada first line is 4 I realized mine was as well and changed it
 

Edited November 11, 2019 by Nak Khid

[Surfingthewave]

Words write on paper 

Dots, crosses, lines, swirls and breaks 

Until silence speaks

 

Edited November 11, 2019 by Surfingthewave

[Nak Khid]

@Surfingthe wave a nice one

[Nak Khid]

irreverent tones
reveal a person's mythos
graduation blues

 

[Preety_India]

Focus is primary

Time is short and momentary

Story ends in the cemetery 

 

[Key Elements]

When the ego goes,

you suddenly awaken;

then, you tell the tale.

___________

No one understands.

For words are always stories.

No one can relate.

[SoonHei]

five sylz first you say?

then seven in the second?

ok, how is this bruh!?

[Amy Irene]

Magical dreamspace
Have not realized, this time
May be eternal

---

Again, untold tale
Only one date in the stone
Glimpse of light, faded

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Finite days, run free
Awake, stand up, feel the breeze
This life is a gift

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The warmth of your skin
I will stay cold until you
Ignite my life flame

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Remorse, bitterness
Castle hill's tragedy stays
In minds forever

[Nak Khid]

I am updating  the opening post to include 3-5-3  Haikus which some think are closer to Japanese form

feel free to use

5-7-5

or

3--5-3

 

Edited November 12, 2019 by Nak Khid

[Emotionalmosquito]

NoNutNovember

Channeling the chi upwards 

Nearly half way there  

 

A great joy death is

Mankind is so obsolete 

God please end us all

 

Plunge in frozen lakes

To build strength through elements 

It works like a charm 

 

 

[Chakra Lion]

it will be

the mind that is lost

shall be free

Edited November 14, 2019 by Chakra Lion

[cetus]

sheer curtains hanging in an open window

dancing on every breeze

the ceiling watches as it admires the fabric

 

 

 

 

[loub]

Have you things their way?
Find the scared child in your needs
To Manipulate

[Nak Khid]

Ten Facts per second
Is what was promised to us
Digital brain scan
 

[Mu_]

Blind-men tell tales of Color

Fond memories of wind, god, silence pass

Each now stand as One

[Angelite]

I can Always

Create a sense of Wind

By inline skating 

 

/skating downhill

/figure skating

@Mu_~~

Or by running downstairs~

It's windy now. I don't have to do anything?

Edited December 8, 2019 by Angelite