Help with Lyrics!

[Rilles]

@Ether You dont need a deal for Spotify, my stuff is on there, you need a distributor and your songs have to be mastered but you dont need a record label

Edited June 12, 2018 by Rilles

[Ether]

3 minutes ago, Rilles said:

@Ether You dont need a deal for Spotify, my stuff is on there, you need a distributor and your songs have to be mastered but you dont need a record label

Link to your spotify music

and whats the distributors you recommend?

[Rilles]

@Ether

I use Record Union but you can also use Spinnup although they took too long to release my songs so I cancelled my deal with them.

[Ether]

@Rilles congrats on 66k plays

[Rilles]

@Ether thanks man! 

[zoey101]

@Ether @Rilles Wow I have some catching up to do lol

[zenjen]

Beautiful voice. Reminds me a bit of Idina Menzel

[zoey101]

13 hours ago, zenjen said:

Beautiful voice. Reminds me a bit of Idina Menzel

OMG!!! You are my absolute favorite person in the world right now!!! That's gotta be the best compliment I've ever gotten ??? lol I adore Indina, thank you

[Nahm]

@zoey101 Fantastic voice❤️

[zoey101]

@Nahm  thank you!

[Ether]

22 hours ago, zoey101 said:

@furashido @Ether @zenjen @Rilles

Okay, here is the recording of what it sounds like (just me singing) 

I think I uploaded it correctly lol

2018_06_12_12_07_53.mp3

Let me know what you think  

 

Wow, I expected you to sound different hahaha

[zoey101]

15 minutes ago, Ether said:

Wow, I expected you to sound different hahaha

Like what? lol 

[Ether]

@zoey101 Higher voice  

[zoey101]

1 hour ago, Ether said:

@zoey101 Higher voice  

lol I can sing some high stuff Just depends on the song lol

[Rilles]

@zoey101 Keep writing and posting songs! its so nice so with fellow musicians on this forum

[zoey101]

Alright yeah it's really awesome. And globally too

[louvar]

Sounds mainstream hippish, great voice

Edited June 18, 2018 by louvar

[zoey101]

Hey guys!

So I have been working on this song and I have made a little progress and would like your thoughts

The sound and flow is still the same as this recording: (I will post a new recording later today so you can hear it with the new words)

2018_06_12_12_07_53 (1).mp3

I changed a few of the words and added a second verse. What do you think?  

 

What’s this feeling inside?

I tried to run, but now I can’t hide

Never thought that love could ever feel this good

Your tender touch

Can’t fight it ‘cuz I love it so much

And I could never imagine life without you

By my side

 

(Chorus)

So let’s run away, run away

From this place, place

We can get away, get away

From this craziness

Come follow me, follow me

On this melody, melody

We’ll be happy, happy

So, let’s see where this leads!

 

Always gave more than I should

Never felt like I was any good

Life just seemed to keep on beating me down

But you saw me

You saw right through my insecurities

And there is nothing that can stop us now

From being free!

 

ANY suggestions or changes are greatly appreciated! I am now trying to figure out what I can do for the bridge, so if you have any ideas, let me know! 

 

Thank you!

Edited July 16, 2018 by zoey101

[zoey101]

5 hours ago, zoey101 said:

Hey guys!

So I have been working on this song and I have made a little progress and would like your thoughts

The sound and flow is still the same as this recording: (I will post a new recording later today so you can hear it with the new words)

2018_06_12_12_07_53 (1).mp3

I changed a few of the words and added a second verse. What do you think?  

 

What’s this feeling inside?

I tried to run, but now I can’t hide

Never thought that love could ever feel this good

Your tender touch

Can’t fight it ‘cuz I love it so much

And I could never imagine life without you

By my side

 

(Chorus)

So let’s run away, run away

From this place, place

We can get away, get away

From this craziness

Come follow me, follow me

On this melody, melody

We’ll be happy, happy

So, let’s see where this leads!

 

Always gave more than I should

Never felt like I was any good

Life just seemed to keep on beating me down

But you saw me

You saw right through my insecurities

And there is nothing that can stop us now

From being free!

 

ANY suggestions or changes are greatly appreciated! I am now trying to figure out what I can do for the bridge, so if you have any ideas, let me know! 

 

Thank you!

2018_07_16_12_31_49.mp3

Here's the sound. I messed up at the end, but you get the point lol

[zoey101]

@Nahm @louvar @furashido @Rilles @Ether @zenjen