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A (Song) about the Night and the Rain

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Enjoy :()

New song:

 

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Bro, please work on production and flow.

Your voice sounds separate from the song, like you had a beat and recorded it on your phone and pasted it on.

Also your flow does not stick to the beat. Most of the times it does but then it doesn't it makes me cringe.

I do appreciate your courage, hard to put this shit out.

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2 hours ago, dude said:

Bro, please work on production and flow.

Your voice sounds separate from the song, like you had a beat and recorded it on your phone and pasted it on.

Also your flow does not stick to the beat. Most of the times it does but then it doesn't it makes me cringe.

I do appreciate your courage, hard to put this shit out.

Hard to put this out? I love my own songs, buddy. Sorry to tell ya but your opinion isnt the highest of them all or the final, either ways.

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I think if you get a more aggressive sound in your voice it could sound really cool :) I didn't hear too many rythem issues. I heard maybe one or two spots, but that's an easy fix :)

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47 minutes ago, zoey101 said:

I think if you get a more aggressive sound in your voice it could sound really cool :) I didn't hear too many rythem issues. I heard maybe one or two spots, but that's an easy fix :)

Yeah, i forgot to put the volume of the beat higher, so I just rapped without listening that clearly, I switched it up later in the song.

Checkout my new song, it has an aggresive sound haha (towards the end)

https://soundcloud.com/x-x-687663775/dimensions-freestyle

 

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Do you get your background music from a sampling site? or did you make it?

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8 minutes ago, zoey101 said:

Do you get your background music from a sampling site? or did you make it?

The instrumental? I know a producer

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That's really cool :)

I wish I could do that kind of stuff lol

I'm still trying to get past "myself" and write lyrics lol but it's hard when I'm not the best writer to begin with 

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12 minutes ago, zoey101 said:

That's really cool :)

I wish I could do that kind of stuff lol

I'm still trying to get past "myself" and write lyrics lol but it's hard when I'm not the best writer to begin with 

I started writing basic rhymes too, it comes with practice. And you can do that, never put yourself down even If everybody is doing it. Its your life to live, not theirs.

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Thank you :) I'm gonna try and post some stuff soon. Not sure what I'm waiting for now, but I'll do it eventually lol

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3 minutes ago, zoey101 said:

Thank you :) I'm gonna try and post some stuff soon. Not sure what I'm waiting for now, but I'll do it eventually lol

Procrastinating sometimes means you fear an outcome, so you try to make it as late as possible.

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13 minutes ago, Ether said:

Procrastinating sometimes means you fear an outcome, so you try to make it as late as possible.

No disagreements here lol

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19 minutes ago, zoey101 said:

No disagreements here lol

Just do it, what do you got to lose? You could be a rich singer

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5 minutes ago, Ether said:

Just do it, what do you got to lose? You could be a rich singer

That's what my family and friends have said >.< 

I know I can do it. I just need to do it lol

(perfect moment for Shai reference lol)

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@Ether I honestly don't know. I have been in music training since I was little, I know I have the voice for it. But when I try to think of how to get started or what I should post just to get something out there, I just get anxious about it. I guess I still care a little too much what others might think ^_^

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@zoey101 Do you meditate? Besides meditation, are you conscious of what you are doing through out the day? Thats what I do. Works like wonders.

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@Ether I've been meditating more lately. I still don't know for sure if I'm doing it right lol but the quiet stillness is nice for a while. 

As for the consciousness, I like to believe I stay pretty aware of things, but again, still learning exactly what I'm supposed to be looking for.

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@zoey101 WHen walking, focus on the sensation of the feet hitting the ground.

When eating, focus on the teeth chewing.

When listening to music, pay attention to the words.

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@Ether Hmm. Okay so I have not been that aware lol

With music, I am able to connect like that, but not with daily life just yet.

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