Not A Place Where I'm From (Song)

[Ether]

Not A Place Where I'm From

Checkout Second Verse

Ghetto, not a place where im from
But I hear rappers, where they from
And thats their home
Where dudes be creepin, peepin, sneaking, feastin, gangbangin
Smuggling, hussling, fussin and muzling
Dippin, hittin, creatin and runnin
Im not from there
Im from here
This is my lair
Not a cave, not a basement
A living room
Small living room
I live mostly in my room
But I look at you
And Im you
And you are me

Oooooooh, you are meeeeee
I am yoooooooou
What are we gonna dooooo

18 year old kid
I aint gonna give you more info
Dont want you to find me, kid
For most my life ,thought it was wasted
Turns out I was zoned out, spaced
I wasnt focusing on this moment, present-ed
So, I was going back and foward, back and foward
From moment to moment to moment to moment
I never owened THIS moment
Damn, took me 18 years to realize this
So, I took action, sick of waiting, I took action
Every action counters with a reaction
My reaction was calmness, not peace, calmness
No more sadness, no more hurt
Just okayness

 

 

[Ether]

@Viking @Nahm tag your friends @Charlotte

[Rilles]

I like the beat and you have a good bassy voice for rapping, you need to work on your flow and delivery though. Try writing 16 bars that follow a similar meter. Best of luck! Im rooting for you!

[Ether]

46 minutes ago, Rilles said:

I like the beat and you have a good bassy voice for rapping, you need to work on your flow and delivery though. Try writing 16 bars that follow a similar meter. Best of luck! Im rooting for you!

Thanks, uuuuuh, thanks for the support, uuuuh, album out in, uuuuh, stores, uuuuh.

Hahaha.

Thanks bvro

I always thought my voice was bassy high, but different perspectives, I see.

[Rilles]

A good voice can take you far, my rap voice is not that good naturally, use it as best as you can. Who produces your beats? You buy them?

[Ether]

@Rilles My first 4\5 mixtapes were produced by one friend that I no longer talk with. These recent 4\5 songs have been by another friend, Veles Ryses. All for free.

Edited May 15, 2018 by Ether
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[Rilles]

Thats awesome! The beat is the really good!

[Ether]

14 minutes ago, Rilles said:

Thats awesome! The beat is the really good!

Yea, I like my new friend's beats more than the other's.

Checkout my newest playlist

Edited May 15, 2018 by Ether
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[Charlotte]

@Ether ?

[Ether]

2 hours ago, Charlotte said:

@Ether ?

What do you like about it?

[Charlotte]

@Ether You should definitely keep working on your vocal flow in the song (I don't know the specific musical terms used ?) your definitely progressing, love the beat!!! Actually got stuck in my head ?

[Ether]

@Charlotte Hahaha, that's Veles Ryses, check him out on youtube.

Its flow

[Ether]

bump

[Rilles]

Haha bump in the trunk my man

[Ether]

5 minutes ago, Rilles said:

Haha bump in the trunk my man

check out my new song (without beat because I know nobody) lmao

 

 

[Ether]

2 hours ago, Rilles said:

Haha bump in the trunk my man

 

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