My New Mixtape About\Partly\Mostly Bout Enlightenment

[Ether]

@Nahm @Charlotte (told you i rapped)   @Faceless (someone quote him cuz its not letting me) 

@Torkys (same shit)

 

bruh quotes aint working, but enjoy, peace

[Torkys]

It sometimes doesn't work for me either, @Ether. You gotta delete the "@" and type it again. @Faceless

This was your first album mixtape that I listened multiple complete tracks from, so congrats on that!

Things I think you could improve: definitely the production and audio quality (in "Ego" your rappin' and the music being out of sync ruined it and those exhales are annoying), your rapping skills, and your lyrics - maybe it's just me but it just scratches the surface and has no deep-deep meaning.

Try adding more poetic value to your lyrics - try writing a song in two or three days even, quality over quantity. Also, keep knowin' because you are stuck expressing the same knowledge and experiences.

Edited April 11, 2018 by Torkys

[Ether]

@Torkys aite , thx

[Ether]

@Torkys Whats your favorite track?

[MM1988]

Sorry but you cant rap, it sounds like you just read something off a paper, no emotion. You have no flow and you are off the beat. Just my honest criticism, i hope you get better. Cant say anything about the lyrics because i didnt listen to it that much.

[Ether]

32 minutes ago, MM1988 said:

Sorry but you cant rap, it sounds like you just read something off a paper, no emotion. You have no flow and you are off the beat. Just my honest criticism, i hope you get better. Cant say anything about the lyrics because i didnt listen to it that much.

haha, aite, it doesnt affect me but thanks for the plays