Few days ago I made my first video and I'm interested to hear what do you think about it.
Unfortunately English is not my first language and therefore I can't express my thoughts as clear as native speakers do. That's why I'm asking you guys to help me out here. You can criticize me - it would help me a lot. (I used phrases like "to be a better place" and few more too many times and when I'm watching this video, my ears are bleeding therefore I will be making a new video but before making it I need feedback from the people.
This idea in my mind is so clear and pure, and I really want to involve more people in what I'm trying to accomplish here.
So here is the video
